''Good first idea but needs stories and a picture on it to make it look authentic'' Ryan Merrell
''Maybe experiment with the composition and possible colour schemes'' Keisha Chan
After Design Idea Two
''Still looks very blank, needs colour and change of fonts etc.'' Ollie Thick
''Sort out fonts and think of a magazine title'' Keisha Chan
After Design Idea Three
''The image here works well because it uses direct mode of address to really interact with the audience and intensifies the ambiance. Although I do think that it needs more writing down the side to link it in with the planning. Also it needs to follow the audiences expectations of a film magazine so needs a date and price.'' Rebecca Chatterton
''Good colour scheme they all stand out. I like the way the girls eyes are looking straight at you it gives it a personal touch and you feel part of it'' Keisha Chan
''Good colour scheme they all stand out. I like the way the girls eyes are looking straight at you it gives it a personal touch and you feel part of it'' Keisha Chan
After Design Idea Four
''Like the picture, the character's eyes make her look really intimidating, like the way she is looking right at you. The picture also really makes the film genre stand out.'' Ashleigh Lydford
'' The minor details added gives a good effect. I think that the title of the film is unclear compared to the rest of the writing. I think that it needs some kind of glow that make it stand out against the dull background. The rest is really good so far. '' Keisha Chan
FINAL
''I think this is really effective. The font of the film name is good as it looks as though it has been sliced into the picture. The genre is also emphasised by the red P as this colour makes me think of anger and blood which I would associate with a horror film. I like how the actor is looking straight at me, it makes me feel like I am one of her victims.'' Amy Parnell
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